When is the last time you phone to your friends or relatives who lives in the same region?Since the technology becomes more mature these years, the distance between people becomes closer, and, more far away. Commercials and Media claimed that technology brings you numerous benefits,including : you can easily get up-to-day information, increase your opportunity to contact your target customer, e-learning and e-book reduced paper used etc.. However, is it ONLY brings good things to us?
Search Engine makes information more easy to access,however, people nowadays rely on the information on the internet too much, this makes them lack of judgement to the online resources.This may cause error when doing research. In one of my information system class, I had heard a quote from my teacher"The world nowadays is divided into two period of time: Before Google and After Google". This shows that how powerful this tools are. In my early Childhood, if I've got any problem during my study, my parents will bring me to the library; nowadays, children will be given an Ipad to look for information. Obviously, information from books in library is more reliable than the online resources.It is because it is approved by the publisher, but everyone can put things on the internet.
Technology makes people more easy, but more lazy to communicate with each other.Before the popularizing of smartphones, people used calling or emailing to contact others;nowadays, people even text each other within the same house, rather than walk into their room and make them go out and have dinner. Do you wonder is technology really make each other closer? If we rely on technology too much ,it will only make us too lazy to be with each other.
Technology nowadays brings us convenient and comfortable life, but we have to use it properly to make it really makes our life better.
You simply divided the pros and cons of using the Technology into two paragraphies. But still, you spotte out key issues in regard of the trend of using technology. On the other hand, it would be better if you could reduce the grammatical mistakes in the article.
回覆刪除It is good that you use a question to start your introduction.
回覆刪除However, there is only one paragraph talking about the advantages and another paragraph describing the side effects. You should divide the points into several paragraph.
Also, the conclusion seems too short and more elaboration are needed for the suggestion.